Apnea

A Poem by schlanks

A battle for presence

Opponent: a held breath

Holding me as they proceed

Incomplete

Yet unimpeded

Author's Note

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I have sleep Apnea, this is written well.

Thank you!

A nicely written write. enjoyable to read

Thank you!

not a problem

Nice writing. Enjoyed well

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it!

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Added on December 14, 2023
Last Updated on December 14, 2023

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