Black Ice Sky

Black Ice Sky

A Poem by schlanks

N i g h t  s k y  s e a s o n
Lines the paths that lead to you
And I, in admiration
Resign to watch the falling view

Untrampled starlight disregards me
Leading home only my dreams

© 2023 schlanks


Author's Note

schlanks
All feedback welcome. The first line is spaced out like that because I kept getting error 003 when I tried to publish it normally and I don't know why.

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A wonderful write here, well written

Posted 2 Years Ago


schlanks

2 Years Ago

Thank you I appreciate it
Sweetly cute, dreamily romantic

Good read

With love

Matthew

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

schlanks

2 Years Ago

Thank you!
life would be kind of meaningless without a dream, Enjoyed the read

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

schlanks

2 Years Ago

Thank you!
Dreams are building blocks of expectations. Great writing

Posted 2 Years Ago


schlanks

2 Years Ago

Thank you!

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Added on December 15, 2023
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