Branches Above

Troubled
By the unhidden emerald
Caught amongst the stars
In the eyes of the beholders
Avoiding the gaze of reflective waters
Only breathing easy in the shade of higher green

Author's Note

All feedback welcome.

Reviews

[living lavender]

loved the imagery in this poem.
favorite line was the last:
"only breathing easy in the shade of higher green"
{beautiful wordplay.}

[schlanks]

Thank you!

[poetgurl]

This is so wonderful and beautiful

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Thank you :)

[June bug]

This is wonderful, enjoyed this

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Thank you!

[Emily Rose]

This is fantastic! I love the colours and imagery used in this and the emotion it evokes. Thank you for sharing this :)

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Thank you very much!

[nadia dmitri]

This is really pretty, I love how deeply it can be read in so few words. Great job :)

[schlanks]

Thank you for enjoying it both on the surface and beyond :)