Driven

A Poem by LSS

DRIVEN to Become

what I expect

Others want of me.

© 2008 LSS

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Angel Baby

DRIVEN to Become

what I expect

Others want of me.

Sounds like something I would write. Nice Job. P.W.

Posted 17 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Zatoichi

3 more syllables and you'd have a haiku. you've written an interesting thought here. there is a lot left to say, tho your silence is eloquent. Z

Posted 17 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on December 10, 2008
Last Updated on December 10, 2008

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LSS

Syracuse, NY

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Some time ago, I decided to write a humorous short story to give my wife on our 25th anniversary. The words and illustrations seemed to flow from my memory and imagination, about those early days w.. more..