This was very cute (and sounds like what my house was when I was a kid). I particularly like the sing-song rhyme scheme that you captured, almost like a Mother Goose rhyme. A nice little tribute to a daily routine. Excellent piece.
Some time ago, I decided to write a humorous short story to give my wife on our 25th anniversary. The words and illustrations seemed to flow from my memory and imagination, about those early days w.. more..