Family

Longing for that sense of peace

That comes with the end of each day

Stretching towards that sweet release

To soothe all my stress away

Left behind a job to be proud of

On to friends and family sounds

Comforted in the circle of love

That ultimately abounds

 

Reviews

[Enigma]

Beautiful. Absolutely brilliant in all its simplicity. :)

[Michael X]

This is beautifully written and expressed with feelings of understanding
the meaning of happiness and what it means to succeed, what I enjoyed is
the way you are able to capture passionate multitude with minimal wording,
shows focus and intent, awsome poem, thanks for sharing such talent.

[Dani California]

Perfect !!! I love this! Everything that means anything.... love.

You rock girl.. !

[Adela Muresan]

Nice :) .
I love the way you illustrate the family's importance in your verses.
This extra-extra-extra positive, poem has deep roots in reality and that makes it great !

A.M.

[closed account]

I love it sooooo much!! I can so relate to this short yet big poem!!! I come from a x-large family so i understand the unity that is untouchable!!!!!