Death

Death is an enemy
Death is a friend
Death is a part of life
It shows up at the end
It comes for everyone
Whether young or old
Many people describe it
As feeling very cold
Sometimes it comes early
Sometimes it comes late
Sometimes it's done by love
Sometimes it's done by hate
Sometimes on accident
Sometimes on purpose
It can be brought by others
Or time will bring it to us
Death is inevitable
we all have to face
No matter how much we try
we don't pick the pace
So until we take our last breath
Every day we can escape death

Reviews

[RomaJ]

I love how you explore death as enemy, friend, and part of life, and the repetition of “sometimes” really highlights its unpredictability. The ending is especially powerful, reminding us to value each day we have. A simple yet deeply thoughtful reflection on mortality.

[Scorpious Alpha]

Thank you, RomaJ, I didn't even see it like that, your analysis makes me see it in a different light

[Davidgeo]

Sometimes when I'm just sitting somewhere waiting for something idly, a line from the first Matrix always crosses my mind "You hear that Mr Anderson? That is the sound of inevitability...".

This is good work you have made here. You capture the inevitable quite well.

[Scorpious Alpha]

Love the Matrix, and thank you!

[ETERNITY]

Since my twin, Eternity, can't sign in, I'm speaking for her. She's thinking about Death but she wants it both ways. She's like that. LOL. Good points on ALL.
Oh, yeah, Eternity says "ITs AMAZING!"
Twit LOL
Desiree'

[Scorpious Alpha]

Thanks, ladies🙂