Yes I know what I want to write
but I won't put it down on paper,
that's my affair.
And I know what I want to say
and if I get a chance I will
but it'd be a waste of air.
And I know what I want you to think
but I can't make up your mind,
but I'm getting there.
Longer may make your intent clearer and I like scratching my head and saying, "What the...?"
The title made me expect to read a poem about your (extramarital) affair. Speaks to a reader's expectations in general, yes? And then of course, is the reader's interpretation.
I like your quirky style. It's smart, light, tight.
Longer may make your intent clearer and I like scratching my head and saying, "What the...?"
The title made me expect to read a poem about your (extramarital) affair. Speaks to a reader's expectations in general, yes? And then of course, is the reader's interpretation.
I like your quirky style. It's smart, light, tight.
Born in Toronto. Raised in the suburbs. Schooled in journalism. Lookin' for meaning in an uncertain world. I spend a lot of time writing for a girl whom I'm not sure exists, but I thought she wasn.. more..