A hidden poetic mind

Cannot express yourself in person to others but with a pen in hand the feelings flow free. The majority of you would agree.

Emotion only on paper,

Written more than said,
Heart bleeds upon pages,
Too few have read,

Reviews

[CLBombay]

I like how concise and simple this is while carrying a lot of meaning as well. I will just ask: what was your reasoning for for ending it with a comma? Is it to show that this poem, in a way, will continue onward on paper?

[lily]

I have read several of your poems so far, and I love your writing, like there is no other way to explain it. It's just beautiful. Well done.