And this is all

The tragic consequence of when love can no longer out weigh the amounting life pressures

And this is all…

My life is far from failure free,
And this is all that they will see,

Refuse to let my struggles show,
And this is all that I will know,

Voicing lies that you will hear,
And this is all that I do fear,

Our lives a plight of love and lust,
And this is all a game of trust,

Already know that I have lost,
And this is all at a great cost,

I’ve been called a cheat, a fake,
And this is all that I can take,

Fulfil your life after mine ends,
And this is all I offer in amends,

Wet, face down, afloat,
And this is all a suicide note,

And this is all

Reviews

[Patricia Stephmore]

That's so....just....beautiful?..... I don't know...I have no words....... It's just.....wow.

[Briana Noël Manzan..]

That first line, "My life is far from failure free"
Inversion + alliteration = one yummy verse

[Quill]

i like this poem, but anytime i see a sad ending it leaves a bad taste in my mouth, perhaps that's what the poet hopes to achieve