Response to The Blocked Writer
A Poem by Tbear
2-25-2008 
take a breath...close your eyes...empty your vessel...sink into the black ink of night ...ride your blood as it flows through your veins...give yourself time to be....nothing, everything, something,someone, everyone and forgive yourself the nothing for it will surely become...what you need,have and already are....
© 2017 Tbear
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Interesting, the poem seems peaceful when I first read it. I of course read it again and received aggression, yet calm ending. It seems like you forgave this person for being empty and allow them to understand their wrong doing.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Ahhh your critique was exactly what I needed with this piece.. I believe the title leads the reader .. read moreAhhh your critique was exactly what I needed with this piece.. I believe the title leads the reader down the wrong path.. this was actually a response to a friend who was having difficulty with writers block..it may actually have been myself.. :) Thank you for the read :)
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American expat transplanted in the land of shish kebabs and belly dancers. Words need to be released but this earthling needs some help. I hope to find the inspiration through this site. more..
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