Ode To Her

 They left you in the backyard among the withering flowers.

  Your fine body a pantomime of the happy past.

 Your days were numbered when fuel injection made

                                your choke obsolete.

Reviews

[Norman 223]

LOL.A rich mixture that fuelled a short smokescreen. Obviously another vintage enthusiast.

[Vasilees Sybissyl]

Wow, the way you don't explain every detail is beautiful to me. The imagery in the first line is beautiful. Keep writing!

[Tbear]

Thank you so much..I really do need to be more disciplined..I write but not often enough :)

[Shannon]

I wonder how many young people are completely baffled by this? I like the way that you don't explain. I love being in on the meaning.

[Tbear]

lol every single time i read this i have the best chuckle.. 35 views so far and i do wonder how many actually got it...LOL ..glad you did ..it really was fun.. have a friend give you just 3 random words to play with.. this was what i came up with.. my 3 words are in the tagged section..

[Mr.Writer]

Great job! I love this! :)

[Tbear]

Glad you enjoyed it.. :)