Red Steel

Bloody water and razor blades

All of it becomes the same

 

Penetrates the toughest flesh

Over time it stands the test

 

Giving life to those now dead

To the rest we hang our head

 

Broken promises and broken dreams

All the friend and family screams

 

Mourners and the angels cry

To their lives we say goodbye

 

Bloody water and razor blades

Sorrow and grief have paved their ways

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this was a very truthful poem on suicide, I will never understand the reasons to take such a wonderful life!! great write.