When There Are No More Words

This is dedicated to the woman I have given my heart to...

I hope that somewhere deep down inside
Inside your heart
You know of my feelings for you
How true they are

 

No days have gone by
Where I could imagine things different
Your voice I hear to start my day
Your dreams I hear before I sleep
You are the sun in my world
That keeps it full of life

 

How lucky am I
To have such an angel?
An angel in my eyes, you are
You are always there
Through the good and the bad
You save me time and time again

 

Yet elusive you are, Angel
I shall capture you, yes indeed
And on that day
You will realize... you will realize

Reviews

[closed account]

very nice sentiment to your *Ladies*!! haha,, very sweet poem!!

[Michael]

Very nice construction for a free verse. IF I would make one suggestion it might be to rework the stanza where you ask the question. I really don't think it needs it but some might want a bit more direct an answer.

I think the ending is perfect!

[[untitled]]

A wonderful write, and a lovely dedication. I'm glad V sent me this way.

[Christopher 'Windstorm'..]

awsome poem brother, i love the last line. i hope your wishes have come true and happiness has found you

[darkgurl]

"How lucky am I To have such an angel An angel in my eyes, you are" WOW! these lines right here are just wonderful, This is a will written write here, I can feel the emotions in it.