Darkness

Warm deep red blood flows down my arm, 

Growing cold as it slithers further down

Sitting against the cold concrete wall 

No meaning to life anymore 

I take the knife, digging it deeper into my arm 

Trying to find the dreams, the goals, the love, the caring mess

In a darkness i have never felt before, not just in my mind. 

No its swallows me whole.

My heart in your hands now, beating slower and slower

I close my eyes letting loose a single lone tear.

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. I like the description and the story in the poem. In this short poem you create a interesting tale.
"My heart in your hands now, beating slower and slower"
A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Mary]

i liked this, great imagery. it poured emotion. keep it up.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

this sent a chill down my spine just reading this. it is a beautiful, but a very dark concept. very sad that some people actually do this.

[J.M]

Short but beautiful, I like it very much.

[Dark Empress]

Very good, Love it.

[Muhammad]

This is really powerful...you should add on to it!

[alice]

Sometimes a single tear is more tragic than an all-out crying fest.

[whiterabbit]

Wow, very strong. Good job :)

[Marshall Hanson]

Short and to the point. Great poem!!!

[Graceful]

wow...truley amazing.