Ill fated

Ill fated minds 

dart and dabble

in and out

around and between 

up and down

Ill fated hearts

tear and sew

cut and mend

twist and turn

Ill fated hands 

press and hold 

kill and heal 

grab and shove

Ill fated lips 

lies and truth 

words and actions

tingle and shiver

Ill fated thoughts

succumb and pass

torture and please

ponder and fantasize

  

Author's Note

i kind of left this poem open. im sure there is more to it that i can add. im just really tired. tell me what you think

Reviews

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

Good points brought up...wonderfully done.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

a striking poem for sure... wow