Zebra : Writing

Help for title?

Help for title?

A Poem by Zebra


This poem is actually about missing someone, for which the setting sun is a metaphor. If you could give me feedback i would appreciate it very very mu..
Once

Once

A Poem by Zebra


Dunno yet

Dunno yet

A Poem by Zebra


Finsished? or unfinished? is it atleast not crappy? lollll need help with this one, thanks!
To Dream

To Dream

A Poem by Zebra


any ideas to add onto this? or is it finished?
I am

I am

A Poem by Zebra


Drowning

Drowning

A Poem by Zebra


Your Eyes

Your Eyes

A Poem by Zebra