Get Off My Cloud (#9)

Not sharing the spotlight

Get off of my cloud
For in this moment

It's all of mine

Do not worry
I shant let you fall
Whereas, merely I am

Three feet off this ground

But, soon my goals

Will take me higher 

So, go you must

You can't stay here longer
Get off of my cloud #9

Reviews

[Joyce S. Greene]

You tell them, Mike! People trying to rain on your parade have no place on that cloud of yours. This is a great poem and I can identify with it. Keep smiling and writing!

[Michael G. Smith]

Thanks, your comment put a smile on my face.

[Marie]

Didn't the Rolling Stones do this...? I ddn't really understand it...

[Michael G. Smith]

Yes, but i'm not quite aware of the lyrics to the song.

[Lemonhead]

Nice idea.

[Michael G. Smith]

Thanks Lemonhead.

[Lemonhead]

Thank you for sharing the sum of your experiences.