Warmth of Mother's Womb

Deja vu in the comfort of morning's blankets

Wrapped within the morning
I lie alone, far away
As most days I often do
All, but minds eye
Is undercover closed

 

Clinging to empty linen
And then, unconscious folds
Form to dreams of meditation
And then I feel you
Lying so very close

 

The day continues collapsing in
As every second to minute goes
And so I bury myself further, deeper
Thinking less and less, just being

Sensing deja vu

 

Struck by an unawareness
Of the naissances soon
Or what conscience shall remember
Beneath an old famaliar blanket
Can it be, the warmth of mother's womb

Reviews

[rutherford]

Description of the "unawareness" of the womb and transferred later to a blanket. Excellent perceptions.

[Michael G. Smith]

It's one of those unconscious thoughts that if you ponder on it enough comes to the surface. I would of never thought that maybe wanting to stay under a warm blanket was reminding me of those nine months.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Must be. Emotion well-conveyed. :x

[Michael G. Smith]

Thanks Blue.

[Pryde Foltz]

There is that feeling that certain people and objects offer. You capture it here beautifully.

[Michael G. Smith]

I love my Friday's. The house is empty, I sleep in late and then go into the family room to have breakfast and listen to the wind chimes. If this the Friday's where I don't have to take care of the yard. After I do that then I clean house, do the laundry and food shopping and cook dinner.

[Rita L. Sev]

Whatever our mother's shortcomings may have been after our birth, she provided the safety and warmth of Life for those nine months... we are always seeking that protection thereafter...

[Michael G. Smith]

And Subconsciously we want that to be back in that warmth. It's the first place we appear on earth after heavenly home. You notice when people go into complete shut down it's usually the fetal position they take.

[Avinash]

I dont think if anyone of us can remember what it must have felt like being inside there in mother's womb, But when we try to seek bliss or eternal happiness may be is realizing that feeling again.

[Michael G. Smith]

That's why the question at the end.

[shallimarRose]

Wonderful metaphor and knowing your story makes this even deeper for me..shallimarRose

[Michael G. Smith]

Thank you, Rose