Isolation Keeps

Feelings in loneliness

Along roads where mistral sweeps
Loneliness within tis soul ambles deep
Every other step isolation, walking keeps
Happiness forevermore and completely out of sync

Reviews

[Michael K. Evans]

Masterful sense depicted of loneliness in merely four verses.

[Michael G. Smith]

Why thank you so much.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

I agree with Rita. The brevity adds to the impact. :)

[Michael G. Smith]

You changed your name?

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

So it seems, Mike. Someone just called me "Darling" and it sounds real sweet right from his lips. ;)

[Michael G. Smith]

Thumbs up.

[Rita L. Sev]

Loneliness within will keep that joy out of sync - until one is comfortable in his own skin, he will remain isolated... Great poem; the brevity adds to the impact.

[Michael G. Smith]

Again, thanks are we still working on that poem?

[Rita L. Sev]

I was wondering the same thing... :) What does it need?

[Michael G. Smith]

Oh, I didn't realize the ball was back in my court. I'm getting old things slip my mind. I'll back to ya this week.