Smiles Across Your Face

My wife's sunrise smile

Droplets dew settle sweet
Upon a flower gentle sway

Cricket's empathy to the nightress sings

Symphonies which chorus soon negates

Darkness surrenders into full retreat
Withdraws shadow from woodland's bush and glade
To a new found dawn; rhapsody with fresh wet paints
Lending more to 'tis morning's coming grace

 

Sky red; a mistress blush
A rising star blowing warm kisses feint
Beams and winks and such
Sets felicity up, atop this unveiling stage 
 

But yet, a greater anticipation awaits
Than the dawn out yonder which heaven breaks
As the sunrise pales in comparison to the brighter
Summer smile now waking rapture across your face

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"As the sunrise pales in comparison to the brighter
Summer smile now waking rapture across your face"

I loved these lines! Some people's smiles really light up our days. A beautiful write which I enjoyed 😊

[Michael G. Smith]

Thanks again, My wife Milagros's smile is of course the inspiration for this piece.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome! A pleasure 😊

[Matching Socks]

Awwww, that's very sweet.

[Michael G. Smith]

Thanks, my wife is my life inspiration.

[Joyce S. Greene]

Such a beautiful melding of nature and love, Michael. Your love makes the world a brighter place, and your poetry has captured your emotions.

[Michael G. Smith]

Thanks Joyce, that means a lot.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

So sweet and beautiful! What an incredible ode to something that is so beautiful and important. There is nothing like the light of love...shining, warming, brightening even the darkest of hours and days. Hang on to this feeling, it's a keeper. :)

[Michael G. Smith]

Thanks, I have seen the light. Lol

[s y e]

This is a beautiful write Mike - keep this smile on her face then the light in your life will never fade.

[Michael G. Smith]

Great advice.

[Cassie]

Your mornings must surely be always beautiful, make her always happy so that this smile will never fade.

[Michael G. Smith]

That's my duty as a good husband keep her happy, feeling young and the spice in our marriage.

[Moniba]

Wonderful! And Oh, the last stanza ;')
Though it was a bit hard for me, I don't know that many words :p

[Michael G. Smith]

Thank you for your comment.

[Rita L. Sev]

This is so bright and beautiful, Michael! Your love for your wife and her smile radiate from the screen! :)

[Michael G. Smith]

Thanks Rita. Your comments are always inspiring.

[Pryde Foltz]

As the sunrise pales to what's evermore becoming brighter
A warmer summer smile waking rapture across your face

You are a romantic. Lovely poem. Some real beauty.

[Michael G. Smith]

I am, doesn't it make life more worth living?

[Pryde Foltz]

I can sometimes.

[Neon]

Hey, buddy ... you know what, you really do love your wife much, it's showed by this piece. It's a very wonderful piece... Am glad in this cruel world, such kinda guys're still present as you are. Well penned piece, dear Michael ...

May god bless you ...
Happy future life with your beautiful wife.

[Michael G. Smith]

My wife is my second chance at happiness and I will not muck it up this time. Thanks for the kind words.