Simply Simplicity

Describes mi Milagros, mi corazon

Simplicity is her beauty
Merely is her touch
When she enters into moments
Time isn’t relevant enough

 

Shadows befall her
Becoming silhouettes
Crowning halos avail her
Of morning suns and evening sets

 

The falling rain
Serenades her
In writhing rhythms
Cascading through Hispanic hair

 

Beneath the pale
Of moonlight mist
A Madonna draped
Gowned within a twilight dress

 

Countless shooting starlets
Down, falling free
Just to glimpse her
Landing near her feet

 

Merely, simply, clearly
All of a woman
Everything to everyone
But, always she’s in love with me

Reviews

[rutherford]

MG, maybe strange to say but i had the vibe in the back of my head as I read this of George Harrison's, "Something". Yours more poetic.

[Michael G. Smith]

Don't know if I know that song, but I'll check it out on YouTube.

[Pryde Foltz]

A very romantic love poem. She sounds like a keeper and don't you forget it.

[Michael G. Smith]

She is her name is miracles; Milagros. God brought us together.

[Rita L. Sev]

*sigh* Such a beautiful and romantic proclamation of love, Mike. Our "soul mates" really do inspire us, don't they?

[Michael G. Smith]

Yes, how many spouses can say they're blessed to have there other write them poetry.

[Rita L. Sev]

Well, there's yours... and mine... that's two! ;) Working on that piece, by the way...

[Michael G. Smith]

I know you are and I will be patient because I know you have a very demanding job.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Vivid description seen only in the lover's eyes. Romantic, sweet. :) The last stanza wraps them all and the last line is excellent! No better ending could rival what you penned.

Such a lucky girl you have there. :x

[Michael G. Smith]

I'm the blessed husband.

[Avinash]

The amount of mysticism in this poem has quite alcoholic effect of love . Romantic writing in its best form.

[Michael G. Smith]

Thanks, wow a lot of us are up early today.

[shallimarRose]

"Shadows befall her
Becoming silhouettes
Crowning halos avail her
Of morning suns and evening sets"

This is exquisite .. thank you, Rose