Rejuvenating Rains

standing in the rain

Feeling lost...

I close my eyes

And inhale

The rising storm

 

Gentle rhythm

Into drops

Free falls of an acceptance

From quickened sky

 

Liquid softs

Liquid grace

Crying tears

Caressing face

 

The thunder…CLAPS

Echoes an epiphany

As essence liberates

The whole of me

 

Alas

Spirit free

To fly… at last!

 

Pouring waves

Our souls are cleansed

Soaking up the fresh

Rejuvenating rains

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

Liquid softs
Liquid grace
Crying tears
Caressing face

The thunder…CLAPS
Echoes an epiphany
As essence liberates
The whole of me

Loved the flow and spirit of this piece. Mike. Really fine writing.

[Michael G. Smith]

Thanks for the high praise, coming from you it means a lot.

[rutherford]

Water in waves, rain, tears, what have you makes a great cleanser. Great theme here.

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Pouring waves
Our souls are cleansed
Soaking up the fresh
Rejuvenating rains

I liked this stanza the most. :)

[Michael G. Smith]

Describing the feeling of purification ain't easy.

[Joyce S. Greene]

Letting it all out can help free us from despair and release our spirits to fly high and sing once more. I enjoyed reading this one a lot, Michael. I think you have caught the essence of your theme and made it come alive for your readers. Great job!

[Michael G. Smith]

Thank Joyce.

[SyberRose]

Tears do heal as time does too...enjoyed MIke...Rose:)
I like to go back to old poems too and change them a little...especially when I have writers block.

[Michael G. Smith]

Thanks Rose.

[Rita L. Sev]

When tears fall from the sky, we know that God sympathizes... This is a beautiful piece, sorrow mixed with the promise of renewal.

[Michael G. Smith]

This is one of my oldies.

[Tiffany Boles]

Crying cleanses a soul in pain. Much enjoyed, Nice write :)

[Michael G. Smith]

I just sent you a message.