Forever

You and I, like "forever"

Once, two words

Now we are "one"

Reviews

[Dr. YumnaKay]

I like the comparison of the word with two people in love.. Gives a great meaning..

[Michael G. Smith]

It's how I feel about the love of my life mi "Milagros. Thanks for commenting.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

That's nice! You're welcome 😊😊

[Laura Harrison]

so simple yet so beautiful

[Michael G. Smith]

Thanks. Beauty inspires beauty.

[Rita L. Sev]

What a great statement of love, Mike - and a clever look at the origin of the word, too! :)

[Michael G. Smith]

Thanks Rita. Inspired by one of Noodlehead's poems.

[Madalyn Beck]

Beautiful. Absolutely beautiful. :)

[Michael G. Smith]

Thanks Madalyn.

[Cassie]

This one says it all, a very lovely message especially for a new couple. Good one Mike

[Michael G. Smith]

Thanks Cassie. I

[lolitaj14]

Very sweet :) it works as a poem

[Michael G. Smith]

Thank you very much for your comment.

[Blue]

I like how you likened the two people as "words" united. Nice, Mike. Contrary to my poem "Forever", this one is positive and lighthearted . :)

[Michael G. Smith]

Thanks, I was inspired by another poem I read here on this site.

[Avinash]

Nice to see someone finding true love and living a life filled with it. It is faith restoring .

[Michael G. Smith]

You are so right. Have true love with both us having strong faith in God makes for a great marriage.

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

I want to be this way some day My husband was happy at one point
But it changed don't know why but may their
Joy comes from Jesus my husband is very lost we pray
for him every day it grieves my spirit he struggles with Cerebral Palsy
he has a normal mind he is blessed not many do with this disorder he
was born with it but I still have hope and Joy and hope it inspires him
his family are very kind and loving and so Supportive.
this short Poem made me cry it is so beautiful :) Blessings

[Michael G. Smith]

I also hope that he will give in to Christ's love. I was the opposite, I started living life for the flesh but when I accepted Christ's love I discovered a whole new world beyond the flesh to see the important things which are eternal; family and righteous love. Thanks again. Prayers to you and your husband.

[Benita-Staebell M - KindredPoet]

Thank you for sharing this lovely write an thank you for the prayers his nanny and paw paw are always praying for us if any one needs prayer let me know. We been doing a prayer tree it is a artificial tree not real we write down the names and put them on the tree they bless and anoint the names and tree with holy oil and pray over the names and tree and every time we go back to church we will do it all over again we have family friends and church members on the tree if you need prayer let me know I will put your name on the tree. And on the other artificial tree we will put yellow ribbons on them when a prayer has been answered.