Ladybug

To look upon you; pretty sends

     Ornamental subtle touch

Soften tickles my heart's arush

     Grace runneth over passion cup

 

Black velvet stars embrace fiery reds

     Along the runway twirls evening gown drape

Myth to fame, red carpet wings, silent words

     Always lighten winds do take

 

Fly away, into the sun

     Imbue this soul if you must

But, Lady bug forget me not

    When in the arms another you

            will surely share your love

Reviews

[Md. Ziaul Haque]

Awesome! I'm impressed with the way the idea flows spontaneously.

[Michael G. Smith]

The planets were aligned that day, my friend. The eclipse of writers block had left me and then God offered me a piece of His sun. I cherish these kind days. Thanks for the review. I hope you're going to post some more work soon.

[Md. Ziaul Haque]

Yes, hopefully soon.

[zainul]

I hope that your Ladybug will not forget you.
Excellent write.
Colors of Ladybug seem to color our ladies.

[Michael G. Smith]

I hope not too since I married her, ha ha. Thanks friend.

[zainul]

I have a pleasant surprise,an awesome pleasant surprise!
I thank your Ladybug for giving you such a golden prize.

[Lady Strange]

Lovely poem! The connections of the colors of the Lady Bug to the colors in the Lady is nice.

[Michael G. Smith]

Don't you know it! Because it's you Amor. I Love you, thanks for checking my site.

[priya]

It is always a pleasure to read your poems.

[Michael G. Smith]

Right back atchya, I'm grateful to share with ya. Hope you're having a great day.

[priya]

yes..i am.. getting ready for another year in college. :)

[Muse]

I've always been fond of the Lady bug. No I know what you are thinking, I never tried to kill it. I adore their quaint nature. They seem oblivious to their beauty. One of God's magnificent creatures. Your poem serves it very well.

[Michael G. Smith]

I always find when a ladybug lands on me it's such a privilege such as the butterfly. Peace out Muse.

[Tempeste Mavys]

This is so descriptive! Beautiful word choices, and beautiful meaning.

[Michael G. Smith]

I try, I try, lol. Seriously though I've been trying to write a decent ladybug poem for awhile and finally the thoughts came together. Thanks Chelsey for your kind words.

[Tempeste Mavys]

Sometimes patience is the best muse. You're welcome :)

[Avinash]

An invitation to true love and surrender.

[Michael G. Smith]

It is. I should put this on a Valentine Card? Thanks Avinash.

[Avinash]

No doubt :)