Gypsy Mind/Egyptian Cotton

My mind is gypsy

And it dances 

Fantasies of you 

Around the room then waiting

Among the Egyptian cottons

As the thread count continues to rise

Higher and higher

Reviews

[Sammi]

OH! Goodness me Michael this is so-so um suggestive and teasing and I love it! You have a nice way of making your reader wish the you in this little sizzler is them especially when the rising begins! ;) What's a girl supposed to do when that happens? It's so cute and original and imaginative, I really enjoyed it lotz! Thank you for the giggles! :)))

HUGGS!
Sammi

[Michael G. Smith]

Thank you for enjoying this little tease. I believe poetry should be suggestive to the heart but never vulgar to the mind.

[Sammi]

My happiest joy!

[DarkTruth]

Keep going, this one definitely has potential!!!

[Michael G. Smith]

Ok, you have free reign to add to it. Just keep in my I don't venture into erotica territory.

[Rashi Jain]

In such a word count,you expressed so much.Loved it.

[Michael G. Smith]

Thank you. A love for my love send fantasies like sugar plums to dance constantly in my head.