Journey for Dreams

Never forget or dismiss your dreams, you might have to travel in order to fulfil your wishes but the skys the limit, so just keep on trying.

Traveling Wide,

Over Hills to a Tide

stopping and waiting

all through the night

hopes and dreams to justify

with many wishes in the sky

looking high and looking low

youll know where to go

where ever your journeys take you

follow your instincts and dreams

& keep on reaching for the 

Stars 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Helena]

"hopes and dreams to justify

with many wishes in the sky

looking high and looking low

youll know where to go"

I know I commented on this a few months ago but as you have
kindly submitted this again to my contest I shall do so again.

Still loved the flow, the sentiments and the good feel of this poem!

Thanks again for sharing. ~ Helena

[Samuel Dickens]

Very nice balance and flow--I like it. Yes, our dreams must never be discounted.

[Wicahpi]

Uplifting. This is good advice for anyone
chasing a dream. Nicely done.

[~Mariposa Una Lila~]

This was great!! I have been there too.......x0

[The Reticent Receptioni..]

uplifting and prettily written. good job. :)

[StrawberryDream]

I like the end phrasing... How the phrase broke and ended on, 'stars'. Always a nice concept to keep in mind. Following dreams. :)

[Helena]

"follow your instincts and dreams
& keep on reaching for the
Stars

Lovely uplifting poem and good advice which I needed today Anad.
Thank you for submitting this to my "A Chance to Shine Challenge!" ~ Helena

[enuf]

very nice x

[Tim Allison]

An uplifting poem that takes you on a journey as you read from beginning to end. I liked your choice of words throughout. It left me feeling inspired at the end... like I could almost reach those stars. Take care, and thanks for sharing. =0)

[fallendemonofmercy]

hmmmmm............. i liked that you talked of dreams and tales of places far away.
its refreshing to hear about them, since many have released those visions as time echoes on.