Leaf Flight

A fib about a leaf I wrote for class.

 

Leaf Flight

By Dana S.

 

(fib)

 

Leaves

Drift

Up high

In the sky

Flowing in the wind

There they go to a world unknown

Author's Note

I hope you enjoyed my poem, feel free to give me your feedback, thanks.

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

oooOOO.... (staring into the fall sky watching leaves spiral and dance in the wind!)
A picture in motion captured perfectly in ink! A sight that I've seen countless times and always wonder what it would be like to be really tiny and ride the leaf as it drifted up on the twisting wind currents.

Nice!
Aaron

[angelina neves]

wonderful!

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great write, i like it alot

[Winter McPherson]

I liked the words, format and color. Very creative!

[Poeticpiers]

truth presented in poetic prose

[Helena]

What a lovely image you painted in this poem.
Well done indeed. ~ Helena

[An owl on the moon]

So very soft and beautiful, and the form makes it wonderful as it flows so wonderfully. Excellent write!

[R. Cygnet]

I can imagine it so well. I love this.

[Sparkle]

Is there a reason you only use one comma in the poem? I don't think it's necessary.