my drug

my drug

A Poem by victoria

cutting is my drug
all i really need is a hug 
ya so i slit my arm 
i don't think of it as self-harm
cutting helps me
if you cut you would agree
it erases all my sadness
thats all i have to confess

© 2015 victoria


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Chin up. Find a friend through creativity and self worth. Overcome obstacles with your unique ability to write. You may find that those in need of uplifting gain it from uplifting others.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really do like this poem. Yes, I know your going through a lot, but I don't believe you need help. Believe in yourself, and you will get over it. I believe in you!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Ashley Arita

10 Years Ago

Your welcome! Stay strong!
victoria

10 Years Ago

i will. :)
I really like the rhyme scheme. But this poem is depressing and I hope this is not happening to you. No one deserves to go through that. Stay strong hun

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I agree with Spotted Hyena; you need help. Try calling one of these hotlines if you don't feel comfy talking to an adult you trust

1-800-DON’T-CUT – More info on self-injury

*http://www.selfinjury.com – Referrals for therapists and tips for how to stop.

*1-800-273-TALK – A 24-hour crisis hotline if you’re about to self-harm or are in an emergency situation.

*To Write Love On Her Arms (http://www.TWLOHA.com) - A non-profit movement dedicated to presenting hope and finding help for people struggling with depression, addiction, self-injury, and suicide.

*1-800-SUICIDE – Hotline for people contemplating suicide.

*1-800-334-HELP – Self Injury Foundation’s 24-hour national crisis line.

*1-877-332-7333 – Real Help For Teens’ help line.


Posted 11 Years Ago


I read some of your other poems and I think you should call a crisis hotline. I've been in dark places before, and counselors and therapy have helped me. Talk to someone you trust, face to face. I wish I could help you more, but I'm a faceless person on the Internet. I don't know your situation, I only know what has worked for me. Try writing more. Your poetry shows promise, but the subject matter is very worrying.
Sending you Internet hugs!

Posted 11 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on November 6, 2014
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victoria

dalmeny, Canada



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