The secret

A Poem by Pól

© 2013 Pól

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Rahul

lol...you're funny :)

Posted 12 Years Ago

James Hanna-Magill

Dear Paulo

Well you are certainly making me smile today!

Here is one of my pieces on here in exactly sixty words. It is published in an ISBN anthology and somebody actually paid me for it!

Here it is:

Empty Spaces

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'… … …, …?'

'… … …, ….'

… … … … … … … … … … …, '… … … … … …?'

'…!'

'… … … …?' … ….

'…!'

'…?'

'… …, … … ….'

… … … … … … … … … … … ….

The End

© 2013 James Hanna-Magill

And here's the link, should you inspired to give it a thorough review:

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/jameshannamagill/1134322/

Do you know what? As I am a Belfast boy by origin, I think it's an Irish thing - same sense of humour?!

A deep, insightful and accomplished piece of writing, though mine is inferior to yours as yours is shorter and let's face it, less is more!!

Your Irish friend

With a smile

James