what if??

 

what if to be dead  is a second chance for life

what if it was meant to correct the wrong and make it write

what if they comes right away when you say their names

to tell you that they are here, but you can't know they are there

to be honest I think  that they fly nearby

the one they used to love

to make sure they are doing fine and surely need's no help

Author's Note

this one came to me when i was commenting at Aurora's poem

Reviews

[quinfinn]

i think it is possible that we have angels who watch over us, certainly...as a matter of fact i am sure of it...whether we listen to those angels or even know how to is the real question. most of us deny them through disbelief, and that is all it takes to negate their presence....good write, inspired by another great writer...

[Cara]

thanks ^-^

[Junert]

Agree with you Quinfinn, but angels are supreme beings, not ghosts. And angels do look after us.

[quinfinn]

i couldn't agree more, Junert!

[Cara]

me too, i know that angels are different from ghosts

[Alice Maria]

Great poem. Really gives you a different viewpoint in life.

[Cara]

thank you for reading glad you liked it XD

[zaisham9393]

This is so beautiful and thought provoking!
Thank You for sharing :)!

[Cara]

thanks, glad you liked it XD

[zaisham9393]

You're very welcome :))!

[Urja Gokani]

this piece of writing is fabulous amazingly written keep it up !!!!

[Cara]

thank you for stopping by :)

[Urja Gokani]

welcome :)

[Fire Heart]

Ok reading it the second time things should get 100/100!

[Cara]

hehehe thank you ^_^ it means alot

[Fire Heart]

No problem oh and can you add me? Please

[Fire Heart]

I just saw that we were already uh buddies lol!

[Cara]

hehehehe that's ok ^_^

[Fire Heart]

Ok everyone the angels look after us from heaven or earth they come to earth some live in earth and look after us awesome poem I rate it 90/100

[Fire Heart]

This is amazing! I love it

[Nick.B]

Maybe, what if someone's out there watching us, who knows? maybe there's nothing just black, maybe another life, opportunities....anyway great poem love the message

[Cara]

good point O.o
thank you for your time ^-^

[khalid]

very nice mind provoking poem. i loved the idea..

[Cara]

thank you, glad you loved it

[Jack...]

Love does flourish beyond the gates of life with even but a gentle wind to remind us of the love we knew and will never forget. Very nice.

[Cara]

thank you :D

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

This is how I think most days great job 100/100

[Cara]

thank you ^-^

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

no problem ^.^

[Cara]

:D

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

:D