Nymph~

~decanting heart~

 

 

Sad carapace

I am peeling you off

Following

Soft shell crabs

Into the joyous sea!

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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Reviews

[Ed Hart]

don't leave, i want to watch you sip your cup...oh my, look what's happening to you...i've never seen the like...i knew we shouldn't have come to the shore this morning...oh, how am i going to explain this...she's disappeared into the sea...i only wanted to touch...oh my, oh my...why did she have to go

[AlieahRose]

O I THINK THIS IS JUST GREAT...
IT'S SO SHORT...
YET...
SO GREATLY DETAILED...
I'M LEARNUNG ABOUT GREEK MYTHOLOGY RUGHT NOW...
SO I CAN UNDERSTAND ALOT BETTER...
WHICH HELPS BACAUSE...
IT'S STILL COMPLICATED...
WHICH IS GREAT...
LIKE THIS PEICE...
I DON'T THINK ANYONE KNOWS HOW A POEM COMES TO THEM...
IT JUST DOES...
AND WE JUST...
GO WITH THE FLOW...
=]...

[Pax Analog]

Has haiku spirit without syllabic concern.

Multilevels to the shell shedding; mythic, psychological, spiritual.

Reminds me of your Moon in Cancer (the Crab), and the overall mutable Pisces (Fish) water chart signature.

The body's made of sea; the Spirit is a sea of Infinity. One could say our "escape" is always already built in when we learn the quantum shift.

The sea foam plunge beckons!

[My Fair Lady]

Latte with Selene. My favorite time.
As for this work... so beautiful.

[emmajoy]

Stripped of both innocence and guile - your write injects a different meaning to the myth ..

wonderful, as usual, Selene.

[Crinkle°]

oh, so joyful! and a short one, not usual from you, but very appreciated.

[Maurice]

The shortest poem I can recall seeing you write. It just shows that good things come in small packages.

[David W Moore III]

Those damn amorous gods. Someday someone will give them their comeupance. Ridl! Looked at from that angle however this piece becomes a caterpillar escaping as a butterfly from the clasp of male abuse, blossoming into it's new life. Just one more facet to fifteen words.

[Amy Bumpas]

Such mystery and depth of what the sea holds...

[Dream Weaver]

Lovely visual through eyes of mythology...
and a good morning to you Selene... :)

[Brad]

this was very surrendering....fully wanting to...different for you...