Naming Girl~

~senryu~

Cradle myth in bones

enceinte with pale moon daughter

father names her fate

 

 

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Reviews

[A.A.Romanczuk]

absolutely intoxicating...scintillating..."father names her fate"....you steal my heart every time I am moved to read your work :)

[Lachenille Papillion]

Selene!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Jeff Loquist]

this sent my mind twirling inward...excellent

[MuSe Ampoule]

Great poem!

[Bubo]

You are so clever Cupcake.......beautiful.

[Maurice]

A splendid senryu.

[David W Moore III]

I wish I had the ability to infuse in 13 words, the images and feelings you have condensed here. I believe one of my strengths is imagery, but yours is imagery with an efficiency of language.

[An owl on the moon]

There is a vastness here, enticed over generations of voices... and names.. yes.. how they can foretell at times a destiny..

[The Cougar's Den]

Aw, how sweetly clever! Nicely done!

[Brad]

if the moon were wine i would savor every drop, beautiful po, i've yet to brave the senryu...