Kali Manifest~

~senryu embedded in haiga~

Kali Manifest~

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Trance cleaves girl in twain

hindbrain unbolts chthonic flood

disgorging Kali

 

 

 

 

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Author's Note

~for senryu slayers~ word of the day~
chthonic~[thon-ik] or chthonian [thoh-nee-uhn]: of or pertaining to deities, spirits, and other beings dwelling under the earth; of or relating to the underworld

Reviews

[Pax Analog]

A cumulative sci-fi feel to this senryu, a la Species, the mythic reference and keyword converging.

Fabulous poster-like haiga version too. You could have a whole haiga poster line selling like hotcakes.

I love the powerful dynamics you muster in a flash. "Chthonic" is a very Scorpio-muscular word, which of course suits your Ascendant to a tee.

[FireWoman]

Layers upon layers here, depth in very few words. Thank you, my dear princess, for pushing the boundaries and making the reader think~

[Peter Joseph Swanson]

It put a spell on me!

[Matthew Kult]

I tried to read this but I was too busy drooling over the picture. But I am sure it was great....

Regards,

Matthew

[Dream Weaver]

I'm Slayed alright and love love love the pic as well....

[Lola Nation]

very deep...

[Rikkevi Rue]

:-) intriguing selene. not being up on the breadth of your work this appears...well unbridled to convention. Though captivating the simplicity leaves plenty of room to contribute...which is what i like about it.

[Norma M Sutton]

oooo I like this!

[Rick]

Just finished reading Cyberabad, which talked about the Age of Kali, which will end when Vishnu's final incarnation, a white horse, arrives to begin the Age of Kalki.

Coolness. I have no idea what a senryu is but I guess I like it. Keep 'em coming warrior woman. We need sharp steel between us and mediocrity.

[Maurice]

Remarkable senryu.