Remembrance

A random poem also rather old... has a sort of hint of fantasy and lore :)

Regrets overshadow,

The life I have lost,

Bring out the resistance,

Romance the Mistrust.

Do you remember,

A Time before this?

A Time when faeries,

Used to exist?

And in the Free World,

Where everything was bliss?

But ignorance they say,

Can often be missed.

So please don't forget,

The life that we once saw,

The Beauty within,

All that is gone...

Author's Note

R&R please!!!!! Open for critic :)

Reviews

[619girl]

Wow, so sad, but i beliueve some can realte to this. reminsicing on an old memory that happend between them and their ex.

[Jacqueline]

I really liked this poem.
Certain words are capitalized on purpose, right?
I like that, it adds to the flavor of the poem.
Haha.
Also, its short, sweet and to the point.

Just one correction, I think:
"I Time when faeries,"
Is that supposed to be:
"A Time when faeries,"...?

Great though, I really liked it.