Past ..

Past ..

A Poem by silent-tear

Living isn't living if it's only done by half
When the soul lives with darkness so does the heart
Where a dark prison dwells somewhere in the soul
Secrets and fear keep a strong hold

Living with the past isn't living at all
 For we surrender to the pain if it cannot be controlled
 It never really can be once its buried deep inside
 For a trigger will awaken it and again you board the ride
 The heart wrenching pain that you thought was done
 Comes back again and again for a run
 To live a happy life to the best it can be
 You have to accept your past so you can live free
 Choices made through life will always effect
 But accepting your past will heal all the rest
 Then you can live life
 To it's very best

© 2009 silent-tear


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Wonderful. I really like the message I got from this. I was always telling my friends "We can't drive our cars forward and stay on the road, while looking in the rear view mirror. Very well written. Accept your past so you can live free. Amen.

Posted 16 Years Ago


Wow.. inspiring and words of a true survivor!!! Love the flow and simplicity within a complex issue.. past! Many struggle with past issues bogging them down.. have to embrace it to move forward!!! I can relate.. the part I thought stood out with the most wisdom was:

The heart wrenching pain that you thought was done
Comes back again and again for a run
To live a happy life to the best it can be
You have to accept your past so you can live free

100% correct!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


this was very wondeful to read.
it made my emotions rush through my blood. and through my brain


great write i cant wait for more writing form you

Posted 16 Years Ago


Beautiful. If everyone thought like this, the world would definitely be a better place.
This line just really grabs your attention by impacting a really strong truth : "Living isn't living if it's only done by half"
I truly loved it.

Posted 16 Years Ago



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Added on April 23, 2009

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silent-tear

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i'm breathing and walking thro this ride called life i'm a single mum of 4 between 17yrs and 4yrs i don't have fav poets i've never read well known poetry i find some hard to understand my writ.. more..