7DeadlySins (Senryu)

i thought this series of haiku/senryu poems was a good idea, it was harder then i expected tho lol, i hope u enjoy

Pride-

 Thinking Of Me First

Doesn’t Matter Who Gets Hurt

When You Cry, I Smirk ;-)

 

Greed-

 There’s Never Enough

 And I’ll Take What You Have Too

 Don’t Like It? …Well Tough!

 

 

Wrath-

 I’ve Taken Control

 War Replaced Love Long Ago

Black Hole Through The Soul

 

Gluttony -

 Starved For Attention

 I Am In No Mood For Food

I Am Craving You

 

Envy-

You Have Everything

The Reason I Despise You

…Should Not Surprise You

 

Sloth-

Time to smell  daisies

Such fun in being lazy

Don’t think so?...Crazy

 

Lust-

Kiss me in my sleep

This fire that’s inside me

Yearning, Burning, Deep

Author's Note

being a songwriter,,,its hard for me not to rhyme, i apologize in advance lol

Reviews

[KAOlmsted]

SR! I love your Haiku...I've been doing a lot lately, too, but nowhere near as good as this...and for some reason I've been calling mine Senryu *laugh* Oh well...tomaytoe tomahtoe ;-) I loved them all, but my favorites were Pride and Envy...so good.

[Sirius King]

these actually are "Senryu"...i have to change that lol...thanx!

[KAOlmsted]

Always a pleasure, SR!

[Sirius King]

:-)

[Baby Ricochet]

I loved it.

[Sirius King]

thanx man!

[Coyote Poetry]

This is very good. I like the artwork. Gave life to the description. The seven deadly sins are always a good topic for poetry and thoughts. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

[Sirius King]

thanx Coyote

[Crazy Cat Man]

genius. :P

[Sirius King]

thanx man! :-))

[Anissa Amer]

Awesome! And the colors+picture brought alot to it aswell.

[Sirius King]

thanxx :-))

[The Refined Poet]

Hey, I seriously enjoyed this. All of them were funny, but I did especially like the one on pride. nicely done...

[Sirius King]

thanx for checking it out man :-)

[MBollers]

Good poem.Why women as your imagery?

[Sirius King]

i wasn't thinking of women while writing it, necessarily...but i found the pic afterwards, and thought if fit what i was going for

[EMF]

For God's sake don't apologise. It's a cracking work. Each Haiku perfectly matched and a terrific read.

[Sirius King]

i know some ppl can get annoyed with all of the rhyming lol...thanx again for ur encouraging review!

[Ahmad Cox]

Wow, those were actually pretty accurate. Enjoyable read

[Sirius King]

thank u :-)