12-21-2012

12-21-2012

 

…Ssshhhh!!!

I know something…

That no one else seems to know...

The world has already ended

…a long time ago

Author's Note

...this is kind of a lazy write...but hey, its the last day on earth right...? lol

Reviews

[MusicLover]

it is very true. with the advancements of technology it nmade us dead inside. We have been brought up in this sick world. The ony people that are alive as throuhu (writer of walden pond short stoies) we are the smartest when we are newborns. We havent seen the coruption. So once we become corupt, we die. although this is a very short poem it has a truer deeper meaning that the transendentalists tried to tell everyone. Death is inecapeable, just like the coruption from the internet. We dont even realize that it is slowly killing us until we put all of our time into the internet.

Amazing write sir

[Sirius King]

i agree totally, it sad but true

thanx for reading :-)

[MusicLover]

no problem ;)

[Westminster Abbey]

What if we're all dead, and this is our hell?

[Sirius King]

exactly!

[Broken Soul]

Then where do people go when they die.. I dont go anywhere, because I cant die.

[Sirius King]

good question...this may be Purgatory, and to die here means to go to ur final destination...who knows??lol

[Westminster Abbey]

Maybe we don't go anywhere. Maybe we just cease to exist.

[Sirius King]

scarey thought

[Erica Ross]

It's true !

[Sirius King]

lol right