The Cloud that Died

a mystic cloud
seeks salvation in
the colors of an urban rainbow
some faded, some gilded,
not a clear picture,
yet definitive for an instant,
a moment of instinctive barriers
and catastrophic urge to die
to restore endless peace.

Reviews

[Arielle Ann]

conveyed so much through a cloud...something unique about it :)

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. a great ode to clouds ...
. and ... a great ode to peace ...

[Moriarty]

A moment in time captured for eternity in your words...this piece has something very etheral and quietly enchanting about it...absolutely beautiful...

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Truthful amazing write, such wonderful words in such a short powerful write...xo