Pointless Words

Pointless Words

A Poem by Sabrina

Words are words with life

they tell you stories

they tell a life

they tell about love

about romance

about casualties

they tell of life

or of death

of cuddles

or of kisses

yet best of all

they form a picture in our minds

© 2015 Sabrina


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Wonderful! The font is a little strange but things happen.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I agree. Your description of words I liked. Words can make us cry, laugh and remember. We need words, story and song. Keep the mind alive and working. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sabrina

10 Years Ago

Thanks!!!!
Coyote Poetry

10 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Nice and simple poem. The font was a little strange though, so try to use something different next time! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sabrina

10 Years Ago

Thanks! I will try to use a different font next time.
Great poem! Just pointing out one thing, on you last line, it says "The form a picture in our minds" Did you mean they? Great poem though! Nicely done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sabrina

10 Years Ago

Yes, I meant they. My keyboard must not have regestered the y.
@juliza

10 Years Ago

haha, ok, other then that little mistake there you did a great job!

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I love to write and read! I love realistic fiction and poetry. I find writing comes more freely while listening to music. You should try! I like to write about what is on my mind. The people on here m.. more..