Sunshine In My Window

As I lay in bed

Wanting just a few more

Precious moments of sleep

The sunshine floats in

Through the window

The sun in my eyes

Stops the sleep from coming

I finally give in and awaken

Making myself some coffee

Another day, half asleep

I feel like a zombie

Reviews

[Destiny Dreamer]

Hehe same here dear, Beautiful sunshine :)

[Sabrina]

Thank you!

[ShowtunesGiraffe]

The title of the poem is kinda deceiving (not in a bad way!) because the words "Sunshine in my window" make it sound like the poem is going to be nice and happy when in reality the poem is describing the harshness of waking up in the morning! I like it and can so relate.

[mattavelli]

This has great imagery. More punctuation would be helpfull. Haha. I had to read it twice. Thanks for sharing.

[Sabrina]

Thanks Mattavelli! In my poetry I usually forget the punctuation then have to go back through and put it in.
~Sabrina

[Llamas!]

Yes! We are in so much agreement. Your poems have been so meaningful lately. Coffee, the average writers favorite drink. I feel like a zombie too!