Friendly Apparition

Everlasting evergreen,

as the breeze blows by,

nuzzling into my shoulder and neck,

murmuring a gentle goodbye,

as warm tea spills,

steam rising like wisps,

gone is the apparition,

who wished me best.

 

Reviews

[K. Harding]

Short but sweet little ambiguous piece.
I like the use of alliteration, consonance and assonance to help the it flow despite the stops of your use of punctuation.
It's very nice thought I wish it was just a little bit longer.
I look forward to reading more of your work!

[aspen]

the imagery is absolutely beautiful, it creates such a calm and gentle image. wonderful work.

[wolfie]

Thank you!