Floating Away

She took a sip from her cup

and she drowned.

She took a nibble from her plate

and she burst.

Having just something of anything was too much

for a girl who always had nothing.

She was grateful, however,

even as she vanished in the sky...

Reviews

[The Iron Horseman]

Very nice. You captured the essence of something that I can't quite place. It will keep me pondering for hours...

[wolfie]

Thank you, I'm glad you enjoyed it. I hope you can come to your own conclusion and share it. I'm sure that it will be interesting.

[The Iron Horseman]

You're welcome. Still pondering! :)