Left Behind

falling down these long lines

feelings left behind

time slows down

as heartbeats speed

and blood begins to boil

 

falling down through past times

feelings locked in binds

memories die

as cruelty laughs

and tears begin to fall

 

falling down without hope

feelings long betrayed

ties are cut

as envy lies

and hearts begin to break

Reviews

[Sarah]

This was very dark and captured the hopelessness of depression well. I enjoyed the repetition at the start of each stanza, great job. (: