No One needs to know

Leave me here in the rain

let it wash the tears away

only here i let it out

no one needs to know

 

Leave me here in the snow

let the coldness take me in

Only here i let it bleed

no one needs to know

 

leave me here in the darkness

let it cover me up

only here is where i vanish

no one needs to know

 

leave me here in this place

let no one know my name

only here is where i know

no one needs to know

Reviews

[Wolfwind Words]

I like the repitition that you have used. The thems of being alone, whether they are forced or by ones owns choice seem to be reflected in your words.
Sometimes being alone is the only way to heal.
Other times it's all a person has left.

Great Write
Infinity's Shadow

[O.J.]

I like your stile and find all your songs effective. This one is just great. I like the repetition in poems because it makes them easier to read and the rhythm is more fluent. You made it crystal clear because you know how to express yourself. A beautiful write if you're asking me...

[defenestrator]

I'm a huge fan of the repetition, since most of my own stuff becomes a lyric. The theme you've got here is great, establishing a pattern of solitude/abandonment. Can't wait to see more. Favorite line:

let the coldness take me in