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i wrote this, and i can't think of what to call it... any suggestions?

these forgotten words

echoe in this darkness,

walls of a broken heart

 

these frozen tears

shame upon a wall,

glass that seperates us all

 

these unheard whispers

gone within an instant,

souls escaped this world

 

these unseen eyes

invisible to the world,

fears hidden stay deep inside

Reviews

[Atticus]

actually a pretty fantastic poem...