Little Voice

Quite a rushed piece. I haven't written anything in a while and this kinda came out of nowhere this evening after a week of boredom and general loneliness... Will probably edit this when I'm in a better mood.

Crowded rooms with empty floors,

Voices all behind closed doors.

Hundreds of people by your side,

Yet when you need them they run and hide.

The voice inside, your only friend,

The one with you til the very end.

Reviews

[Wildecat]

This is a fabulous poem, really liked this one a lot. Nice write.

[strange_gurl]

that is so true specially this part ''Hundreds of people by your side,

Yet when you need them they run and hide.''

[Legion]

Nice little piece for a "rush" job. Good work.

[Chloe Madison Taylor.]

I've had this feeling before.
I think everyone has.
I love it.