Existing...

Existing.... is an exercise in the frustrations of loss not only of a job but of pride and self worth with emotional processes being brought throughthe xperience with logic.

Existing...
If I am therefore I think, I think not therefore I am not,
I have no talent, although I have many skills, yet if I
don't create do I appreciate who I am?
Does the filling a spot in line give me justification for
self-centered observations?
Will being a man make my feelings be less than what they
are? Should my skills be sent overseas to chase my job?
Will fate laugh with me or at me in the End?
By asking these questions, therefore I AM!

Reviews

[Ronda]

These are great quesitons and a way to put them in place as you have is so wonderful! I like it!

[Sarah]

Great! I loved how the question about existing came together at the end! I really liked the line "Will fate laugh with me or at me in the End?" Hmm I wonder... :)

[The Outlaws' Song]

I loved the way you built this poem...and the idea you started from.
You should try writing some more!!!

Good start and welcome on Writerscafe:):):)