Broken Heart

This isn't a very well written poem...so ignore anything that's wrong with it!

My heart is broken in two

All because of you

I thought you were the one

And my search was finally done

I really liked you

And I thought you liked me

But I guess I was blind and I just couldn't see

When you said goodbye,

I was tough and didn't cry

Even though I felt as if I was going to die

You said you still want to be freinds

But I guess this is how the story ends

Author's Note

Ignore grammer problems...what do you think???

Reviews

[Shae]

Go to my other account...cuz i forgot the password to the one this poem is on. [[does that even make any sense at all??? haha]]

[Berenice]

this is true lots of people feel that they've been betrayed when someone stops loving them. keep writting.

[Lauren]

Yup, it was me (Ashley)! Like I told you before, I think it's a wonderful poem. Keep it up! I'd like to see a few more sometime!

[Shelly Wiseberg]

I think many people can relate to your poem, the only want to be friends answer!
I liked it, Shelly

[Brianna Brie]

Straight forward and to the point...lovers don't make good friends in the aftermath. Nice rhyme.

[Skittles_lover]

I like it. it seemed as if maybe you over thought it. but it is awesome, can't wait to read more
~Amberlee

[Kristen]

I thought that was a really good poem! Don't underestimate yourself (trust me, I do it a lot!) You sound a lot like me, actually. I don't have much experience when it comes to boys (hello, I'm 13!), but "friends" do this to me sometimes. Great poem!

[Brenda Sue]

Very good. I liked it very much. Keep writing.

[G D Howard]

I think I like it! Don't you just hate that whole "let's be friend" line. That's never what's meant.