I Am

For kayla when we where together

I Am

I am looking at you,

Lost in my thoughts.

Can’t believe the cheesy lines that you bought.

I am lying with you,

Lost in your Eyes.

Can’t believe that you are in love with this guy.

I am Learning new things,

Lost in wonder.

Can’t believe that it’s my Sheets your under.

I am laughing with you,

Lost in bliss.

Can’t believe things have turned out like this.

I am Sleeping with you,

Lost in the covers.

Can’t believe that you and I are lovers.

I love you girl,

Lost in your eyes.

Can’t believe you are actually mine.

Author's Note

this was written back when Kayla and i where together

Reviews

[Chris]

Being you is a good thing... sharing a path is an extraordinary thing... and tell her often - sometimes we think it isn't necessary to say things... but it really is and they only get 'old' and 'tired' if they weren't meant.

The poem is a tad ragged in places...but the heart is GOOD... and THAT is what poetry's about...your heart.

Take care,
Chris

[Gobinder Singh Dhindsa]

This is really very good writing. I like whole poem. Keep it up!
Do you read mine too "ANGUISH and SHE"
GOD BLESS YOU!

[Rick Puetter]

Hi Shane,

Got it. Wonderfully expressed. This is simple. Powerful. I get it. I know.

Enjoy life. It can be really good.

Best regards,

Rick

[melissa]

I love the poem shane its an amazing poem hope to read more from you

[Ruth]

Ahh...beautiful dedication and congrats..I am glad she loves you too :) xx

[Arianna]

thats so exciteing.
its so adorable and so cute.
you guys are so adorable.
good luck
and congratulations:)
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[trainwreck]

This was great. I really am glad for you two, and I hope you find truest happiness.

[Coyote Poetry]

When you find happiness. Don't be negative and be kind in words and action. I'm a old man and I made a lot of mistakes you can't take back. I like the emotion of happiness in your words. Love is a gift that need tender loving care. Thank you for a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Happiness is always a pleasure to witness.

[tynamite]

I love the positivity you possess in your poems. It's astounding.